Everyone has someone they look up to, maybe even wished they
were that person. You are probably thinking, “What a typical girl that loves Beyoncé.”
I mean who doesn’t love her? Besides the fact she is a very talented woman, she
inspires me in so many different ways. Social media makes girls feel
uncomfortable with their bodies and make them think that they have to be
skinny. Beyoncé proves that you don’t have to be a stick to be beautiful. We should
all feel amazing in our own bodies. She also teaches me that I do not need a
man in my life. A lot of woman depend on men to put a roof over their heads but
I know that I can be an independent woman and do not need to depend on anyone. She
makes more money than Jay-Z her own husband, that’s amazing to me. She has a
family and still accomplishes so much in life. Listening to her songs inspires
me to go out and accomplish anything I set my mind to. If you just believe in
yourself you will go very far in life and never give up. Not everyone’s
inspiration has to be famous or even a person. Just find something that you
love and helps to keep you going and trust me you will accomplish so much in
life.
What are the strengths and limitations of your text? One of your strengths I think is choosing Beyonce as your inspiration because she does do so much as a woman, and is very successful and has accomplished a lot. But you also could have expanded on why she has been so great, or why she should be an inspiration to everyone and not only you. I like your conclusion where you say to find something you "love" and it will keep you going, because i also believe in this as well.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your purpose of this blog? To show the way you feel about your life and what you want to do with it, and in what better way than by showing us through someone we all know. Someone world wide that everyone knows is a the perfect description of successful and confident. And I mean who doesn't look up to and want to be like Beyonce?
ReplyDeleteI feel the same way about many popular artist they are great people to look up to as well. You may have heard of an artist named "Drake" i feel the same way about him as popular as he is he also never forgets about his friends and family. I for one will always be there for friends and family because they were there when no one else was. I completely understand your point of view towards Beyonce
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